A great first story Fairy. Please do continue to write! _________________ Alli
Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:46 am
carpediem
Joined: 03 Nov 2005
Posts: 12
Dear bleedingfairy,
Such a sad story. Yes, the heartache that comes out of a broken relationship hurts, but you have channeled that hurt to writing a great story and lovely poems. I commend you on a wonderful first try and hope that you have overcome that first heartache.
Good luck on finding your true love and hope to hear more from you,
Carpediem
Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:32 pm
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
you know, i know that park in T you describe.... very well done, fairy, and good for you to have the courage to post.
let me know if you need help with any language questions, i'd be happy to help with suggestions.
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