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SHE CALLS ME GORGEOUS
Mel, my darling, everday
When I speak to her each time
She'll say 'Hello Gorgeous'
It fills me with love sublime
I feel my ego swell
Confident to the max
Don't need to look in the mirror
My self image is intact
However, yesterday she told me
She bought her girls three rats
I asked her what were they like
'Gorgeous' she said, just like that
So, now when she says 'Gorgeous' to me
I picture those little white things
Forget the platitude, I said to her
Save it for your sweet darlings
Do I sound in a huff, maybe so
But has it ever happened to you
To be called the same name as a rat
By someone you love so true
I guess I'll have to fight
For her attention all the time
I don't care what you say
I think this is a crime _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Last edited by Mdm Prez on Wed Dec 20, 2006 12:56 am; edited 1 time in total
THAT IS SUCH A CRIME!!! comparing you to a rat...Mel should hang her head in shame.
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Tue Dec 19, 2006 7:50 pm
Xalia1 Moderators
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~laughs~
Great write Mdm.
((((Mdm))))
Hugs,
Xalia _________________ Nobody said life would be easy...They just promised it would be worth it.
~♥♥~
~The words fail me.. because what I feel for you is beyond description...~
Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:29 am
Avant-garde
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Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Awwwww poor Mel......I can relate...my fiance' owns 14 hamsters, 3 cats, 1 flesh eating Parot
"don't ask"
, and 2 more birds. I told her I have been voted off the friggin island by a bunch of rodents. lol
smiles, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Wed Jan 03, 2007 3:22 pm
Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
Eire
Don't know how I missed this reply. Thank you, and it is a crime.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:10 am
Mdm Prez
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Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
X
thanks for reading about my dilemma.
((((((((((((X)))))))))))))
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:10 am
Mdm Prez
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Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
baby
Poor you. Thanks for reading. I'm at a loss for words about all those
critters you have to deal with.
Mdm Prez _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:12 am
DarkChyldesKiss Site Admin
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Location: Inner Sanctum
Cat,
LOL! Nothing wrong with gorgeous rats! Both Helen and I were born in the year of the rat ! lol
Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane
*chuckles*... you crack
me
up..
I am really anti-rats.. when I met Elora, she had three as pets and she had one that slept in a tissue box on her window-cill. It freaked me out...completely.
*shivers*
Nice dilemma though... let the girl call you gorgeous...meanwhile, come up with somethin' really good to call her in exchange
D _________________ "You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle
Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:40 am
Love Is
Joined: 30 Dec 2006
Posts: 80
Location: Pacific Northwest
OMG, I just read this and LMAO!
Oh Mel, how could you?!!!
Thanks for the laugh, Mdm!
Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:26 am
melons Site Admin
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Posts: 2371
((((((((Cat, My Darling)))))))
LOL....now you know you cracked me up with this *chuckling and pulling you closely into my arms......
of course, you and I know the context of all this *chuckling.
You're humour is like a light to a moth, it attracts in droves....and I LOVE it
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