My Image Of Love
The most beautiful rose in the garden
could not compare to all the beauty
that she has brought into my life..
The warmest day in summer could not compare
to all the love and warmth that she has shown me..
All the poetry in the world could not
express all that I feel for her...
When rain comes into our life,
she shows me the,
beauty at the end of the rainbow...
Her smile is brighter than any stars
in the nights sky..
Her embrace is so strong, and loving,
that it takes my breath...
Her kiss is so soft and sweet, that I never
want it to end....
When I look in her eyes I know that I was
created to spend the rest of my life with her...
She is the very image of love that all poets
write about...
She is my one and only true love...
Sat Oct 30, 2004 4:05 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
Mustang,
I think it is a very sweet poem. Have you given it to her yet?
Dance~
Sun Oct 31, 2004 5:48 pm
MustangLady32
Joined: 30 Oct 2004
Posts: 2
yes I gave it to her this morning!! thank you so much for your feed back
Sun Oct 31, 2004 6:19 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
Aww bet she loved it!!!
Dance~
Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:27 pm
Tullia_1976
Joined: 01 Nov 2004
Posts: 414
Location: Canada
Wow! The only thing I could think was I wish that was written for me. I also wish I could write a poem like that for my wife, she deserves it. I guess you have inspired me, thank you so much!~Tullia _________________ The only things to regret in life, are those you never attempted.
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Tue Nov 02, 2004 2:02 am
Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
Very sweet and filled with sincere emotion!
Linda _________________ a poets heart is never empty....
Linda Bray
Mon Nov 08, 2004 3:43 am
scruples
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 151
Location: Long Island, NY
On "My Image of Love"
It's cool. You uncomplicate the true beauty of love.
Go a little deeper and wider with your verbal expressions, you will find
there are so many waiting for you to use them. I like the flow of the language, soft and demure, and very meaningful.
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