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realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
horizon
earth, water become
sky, sun levitate yonder
- apparent junction
apparent junction
earth, water become sky, sun
- levitate yonder
apparent junction
earth, water, sky, sun hovers
- promises whispered
apparent junction
earth, water become sky, sun
brings us a new day _________________ .
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light is to darkness as love is to fear...
Last edited by realwoman on Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:09 am; edited 7 times in total
Wed Jul 12, 2006 2:33 pm
fortheloveofagood...
Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
HURRAH!
Grins widely
Love it
Kx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Wed Jul 12, 2006 2:37 pm
Hawaiian
Joined: 01 Dec 2005
Posts: 816
Location: Transplanted to Africa
Stunning with the revisions my darling, simply beautiful.
~Miki _________________ 'A'a i ka hula, e waiho i ka hilahila i ka hale.
Dare to dance, leave your shyness at home.
Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:09 am
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
i love the last one, real....
really beautiful!
regards
ghost _________________
MIA
Tue Jul 25, 2006 3:46 am
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