She cried in my arms, on my words
I told her she’s immature, just a spoiled little girl
While blurry rain was falling over my dreams
Oh and she asked me, she asked me
Am I Polish, what’s the color of Monday, do I like rainbow?
Everything, she asked me everything
And I, I thought she’s to immature to understand my answers
Blurry rain was falling and she was sitting
Amazingly white in darkness
Reading the book she always cared with her
Oh how I’ve wanted her eyes to look at me and for her long, pail, fingers to touch me
And silently asked me "do you love me?"
And I, I turned my head on the other side, let the words stay in my thought
She try away her years on the floor
Her lips were uneaten cherry
I was touching her knees while we were lying on the sand
She laughed so beautiful, so innocent
And her laughter hurt like curse
Oh, on those blurry heavy rains,
And empty autumn, her autumn
She was talking about moves, about Marilyn Monroe
With melancholy about Elvis
And I can’t forget the smell of her hair wind cared try the air that day
She kissed me all night long, hugging me, but I swear nothing else happened
And she asked me, she asked me do I have brother,
Why do I like ice cream, how can I understand Dante’s songs?
Everything, she asked me everything
And I, I just laughed, I thought she’s to young to understand my answers
Some silent came across her, for hours she didn’t speak
I could cleared out Spinosa if I’d want to
I could die with my head on her breasts
In silent, completely lost in her embrace
All alone in her arms
With so much tenderness her chest rises and falls
Her heart beaded with some strange seductive melody
And she didn’t say a word, like she was waiting for life to paint her
On the paper of blurry rains
And she asked me, she asked me do I believe in angels
Have I ever reached the moon, do I like roses?
Everything, she asked me everything
And I, I was to tired to tell her the answer
Blurry, heavy rain was falling, and she was sitting
Amazingly white in darkness
Raised her eyes and silently asked me
"Do you love me?"
And I, I could not say a word
By Milla
14th September 2003
Sun Feb 15, 2004 8:09 pm
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I enjoyed this poem on many different levels. Your style is unique, so keep up the good work. -Soul Retriever
Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:57 am
peewee
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cool
Sat Apr 24, 2004 12:42 am
smart_cookie
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Location: USA
Omg, that's good. it needs cleaning up, spelling-wise, but the style and the images are stellar. Wonderful stuff, Milla.
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Wed May 09, 2007 11:18 pm
desert-fish
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very cool poem...hope you found the words...
Sun May 13, 2007 10:40 am
priya
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wow,
so bitter-sweet, so tender, so beautiful...
this is carved on my heart forever.
peace,
priya _________________ Don't part with your illusions. When they are gone you may still exist, but you have ceased to live.
~ Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me ~
Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:56 am
lori
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brilliant _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:37 pm
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Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:49 pm
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Milla,
This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
Hugs,
Eilidh
Mon Dec 17, 2007 4:15 pm
Beth
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Posts: 336
Location: Michigan
This is so romantic Milla I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more
Beth _________________ StarGazer
Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:01 pm
RawRainbows
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Posts: 26
I Love it _________________ Life is fluid, always changing, and always creating.
Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:09 am
storybellz
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Location: U.S.A
Very romantic! And, the words give wonderful imagery! Although (as has been said) it needs a bit of polishing-up, spelling wise, this is still one of the best poems i've read in a long while... and i'm in a literature class for goodness sake! So, there's no doubt to me that you're good; you're real good
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