Sitting Thursday at the Carwash
Trying to get one part of me in order
People-watching the other customers
Wondering which of the ones I see
Are happy with the life they lead
Green Saturn
Big boned shapely Hispanic girl
Tightly dressed in mini and tank
Eating chicken fingers and fries
Slowly licks her own catching my eyes
Blue Honda
Tall red head – forty-ish
Still attractive at her age
Legs crossed, toenails perfect
Talks on cell phone to cat’s vet
Black Ford Pickup
Lean tanned blond – young
Time at the gym visible under her jeans
Bops with headphones - reads a paperback book
Shifts her sunglasses flashes a smile and kind look
Sitting Thursday at the Carwash
Giving up on getting me in order
People-watching the other customers
Knowing the truth leaves no room for doubt
We are all victims of what we choose to live without
Fri Apr 15, 2005 12:29 pm
cmichelle1119
Joined: 11 Nov 2004
Posts: 879
Lost~
Interesting write...I like the visuals you portray.Thanks for sharing hun!
Much Hugs~
Michelle
Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:05 am
wyldhart
Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 1216
lost--
I do the same thing!!...i know what your saying here, babe...
and the last 2 lines...speaks volumes..
Excellent!
warm hugs
wyld _________________ "wyld in the darkest places of your mind"
Sun Apr 24, 2005 11:00 pm
lostsoul
Joined: 28 Mar 2005
Posts: 372
Thanks Wyld! Glad I am not the only voyeaur lurking around at the car wash _________________ At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. - Plato
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