What can I say...this is beautiful and it was a joy to read.
When you ask me to look at form in verses I tend to look for specific verse forms like a Sonnet or Villanelle or a specific rhyme pattern, metre, alliteration or things of that nature.
It is beautifully done sweetie and brings to mind the words of some wonderful poets.
Hugs,
Eiregirl
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I noticed that and I kept trying to think what form this could be...it has little minute aspects of different forms but then again almost every poem does I really did enjoy reading it and it is beautifully done sweetie
Hugs,
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:32 am
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I'm not as good as Eire in dissecting rhythm , but I will say that the images remind me of dancing around the fire during Samhainn. Those were good times and this is a great poem!
~Eilidh
Fri Jun 27, 2008 10:20 am
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