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Bathtub Revelations

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Esme



Joined: 27 Aug 2004
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Bathtub Revelations

I watch steam rise from my body,
towards the woodchip.
It's raining indoors.
Revelations in the bathtub,
I would feel bad,
but i don't.
Tears mix with bathwater so well.
Nothing matters...
I've soaked the carpet,
Like i soaked your shirt.
Tears nestled on your collarbone.
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*ponders*

Post Sat Aug 28, 2004 10:59 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((esme)))

Enjoyed the read....Leaves a picture in my mind.

Dance~

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