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Down to the Bone

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chame70



Joined: 18 Nov 2004
Posts: 290
Location: South Florida
Down to the Bone

High All,
This is a song i wrote a few years ago for a girl friend who had her son taken away. Other reasons were used but the truth is they took him away because of her listyle.

"Down to the Bone" lyrics by Chame Casal music by Tim Duffy
V1
Her soul's been tattered, her heart's been torn
her blue eyes shattered, her smile is worn
Its not her fault,nor is it mine
they took her son and stole her mind

Refrain
she once was sweet, so warm and mine
now she's a ghost, who's lost her mind
and now she's gone; I'm all alone
I feel the pain … down to the bone

V2
I once was calloused, my skin so tough
she was a diamond, in the rough
the years went by and all that changed
Her spirit’s gone, and I'm in chains

Refrain
she once was sweet, so warm and mine
now she's a ghost, who's lost her mind
and now she's gone, I'm all alone
I feel the pain … down to the bone

Instrumental (guitar solo)
Refrain

V3
And if I could go back in time
to when she wanted to be mine
her son was near, there was no fear
nor were there any lonely tears

Refrain (2X) Down to the bone … down to the bone
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Post Fri Jul 29, 2005 5:43 pm 
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NIC



Joined: 15 Aug 2005
Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY


OMG so sad but true ...........this stuff happens everyday!

I'm so glad your able to express your feelings through song rather then retaliate....


I love It!
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