My first post here... and in english (Original is in Spanish and French). I demand your perdon, in anticipation, for sure bad compositions.
Thanks.
Is a little free poem I write to my wife some times ago.
I light under the stars
As the stars are rising, slowly, with each gram of light that leaves us..., slowly and mysteriously, my love renews itself every day, every night, when your beautiful and wished presence clears my soul once again, starting to extract to it the most beautiful verse than my heart can imagine. And although the beautiful day, invariably, always ends up, becoming just one day more... you, my Belle de Nuit, you make me wish to fall in the most beautiful contradiction: the one of the minds that do not wish to think anymore. Because they wish to eternize the moments... and because, in spite of that foolish desire, they go on wishing the arrival of a new light. The light of passing to a new but always perpétual passion... near to you.
A lumière sous les étoiles
Ainsi que les étoiles apparaissent, lentement, avec chaque gramme de
Lumière qui nous abandonne... ainsi, lentement et mystérieusement,
Mon amour est renouvelé chaque jour, chaque nuit, quand ta présence,
belle et souhaitée dégagera mon âme une fois de plus, en lui
extrayant les plus belles rimes que mon coeur puisse imaginer. Et
Bien que le beau jour, invariablement, se finisse toujours en se
Transformant a un jour de plus..., mon Belle de Nuit, tu me fais
Souhaiter de tomber dans la plus belle contradiction : celle des esprits
Qui ne souhaitent plus penser. Parce qu'ils souhaitent éterniser
Les moments... et parce que, malgré ce désir insensé, ils
Continuent de souhaiter l'arrivée d'une nouvelle lumière. La
Lumière qui passe à une passion nouvelle mais toujours
perpétuelle... avec toi.
_________________ We only can be really frees when can let go our soul to fly, as a bird.
SUZANNE
Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:28 am
Tigger Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
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Suzanne
Lovely poem ....well done.
Tigs
Sun Jul 10, 2005 10:31 pm
suzanne
Joined: 25 Jun 2005
Posts: 27
Location: Barcelona
Many thanks Tigger
You are nicely acquiescent with me...
Hug _________________ We only can be really frees when can let go our soul to fly, as a bird.
SUZANNE
Mon Jul 11, 2005 7:48 pm
wyldhart
Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 1216
suzanne....this is truly beautiful (muy hermoso?) ...it touched my heart...
I think you should post it on the poetry forum....under love....
spectacular write, babe
warm tender hugs
wyld _________________ "wyld in the darkest places of your mind"
Mon Jul 11, 2005 9:25 pm
suzanne
Joined: 25 Jun 2005
Posts: 27
Location: Barcelona
Thanks... many thanks Wyldhart.
Your tender hugs has arrived very deep into my heart.
(Yes, in Spanish is "muy hermoso") _________________ We only can be really frees when can let go our soul to fly, as a bird.
SUZANNE
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