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Stanley



Joined: 28 May 2004
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Location: Shenandoah, Iowa
Without You

I wrote this poem for my girlfriend, Karra. I am so very in love with her.

Without You

* What I’m missing without you here…
Is all in the evening-
It’s the look on your face when you first wake up,
It’s the touch of your soft lips against mine,
It’s hearing your voice, or poking you under the covers and
making you laugh.
Is all in the afternoon-
It’s taking a walk with you,
It’s having my fingers interlocked with yours,
It’s sitting down to enjoy a meal we just prepared together.
Is all in the night-
It’s cuddling up on the couch infront of a movie,
It’s holding you in my arms until you fall asleep,
It’s finally falling asleep, with only the sound of your breathing
And feeling the heat from your body against mine.
Is all in the future-
It’s looking you in the eye and saying, “I do,”
It’s saying, “Thank you,” after the birth of our child,
It’s taking a trip, knowing this is my real family.
Is in every day-
It’s knowing that I’ll wake up to spend another day with only
you by my side.
It’s what I’m missing without you here with me.




Okay... so the like... look of it doesn't exactly come out how I want it to on here, but at least you get the words.
Copyright 2004 G Stanley.
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Post Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:32 am 
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Tigger
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Smile Nice poem Stanley...why don't you post it on our poetry boards www.melswebs.com/poetryboards/index.php

Tigs Cool

Post Thu Jun 03, 2004 11:03 pm 
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Stanley



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Hey, thanks, Tigs. I will post that on the poetry forum right now. Smile
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Post Fri Jun 04, 2004 5:35 pm 
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Stanley



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Location: Shenandoah, Iowa


This isn't poetry here... but I just need to talk. I posted that poem over a year ago....

Karra and I broke up a while back, and I still feel like I'm dying inside. She moved a few states away, I have no way of contacting her. I have no clue exactly where she is. I only pray that God keeps a safe watch over her. She was my first love. My first partner. My first everything... my only everything.

And... the title of that poem was "Without you"... I'm feeling all of those same feelings...

Without her here with me, that is everything that I'm missing.

The poem was originally written about her not being here because we met online, and she hadn't moved out here yet. Now... she's gone. Like I meant nothing to her. I feel so lost and alone. I have my good days... but today is a bad one.

Oh, God, how I miss Karra.... :'(
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Post Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:03 am 
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Sad (((((Stanley))))))

I am sorry to hear that you are so low and missing Karra....if you want to chat and vent you know where we all are.

Take care and I hope things get better for you.

Tigs

Post Sat Jul 16, 2005 10:53 pm 
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