Joined: 13 Nov 2004
Posts: 19
Location: Philadelphia
poem
In Love
You are so close to me
that I can smell your sweet esscence
as I wrap you up in my arms
Will you ever know
what lurks deep in my heart?
A love for you that's beyond compare
I can't breathe without it
as you cuddle closer
I wrap my arms tighter around you
never to let go
I love your mouth,
your tougue,
your voice
quivering my name in your climax
Forever and ever you will be mine
I will make you shake and quiver
in this life and the next
until the end of time.
like?
Sat May 21, 2005 1:53 pm
heartofwoman
Joined: 14 May 2005
Posts: 15
it was beautiful.
as i have said before and will probly say again, i love poems about love=))
and the deeper, the more obsessed the better=))
ps: i ain't writing poems right now cos i lost my little book so now i have to remember old ones or make new ones all over again
Mon May 30, 2005 4:09 pm
HonestHeart
Joined: 13 Nov 2004
Posts: 19
Location: Philadelphia
Thanxs very much I need all the opinions I can get.Sorry about your lost book I have been writing for years I just never saved them until last years. I keep mine on disk and in a book. Maybe try that? Can can't wait to read yours.
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