Hey, me again.... Love life problems made me wrote a poem... the first one in my life ever probably. Do you think I should show it to her? Do you understend what I am trying to tell in it? Well here it goes:
For my girlfriends two personalitys
I want to fly away
And forget all about you,
Couse the past hurts too much,
And the future scares me.
Is it always so hard?
I miss you,
I miss your wake-up kiss,
I miss your touch, your hands, holding me so close,
I miss your warm lips on cold winter evenings, and even your red nose,
I miss your magic eyes and your whisper that you love me,
I miss your loving smile, when I say something stupid,
I miss your love and beating of your heart,
I miss you
Really YOU? Or HER?
Who are you anyway?
Why are you so different from her?
Are you the one I loved so truly?
Are you the one who showed me what love is?
Are you the one I called the love of my life?
No….
YOU are just a big reminder!
I don`t want to see you,
I don`t want to hear you,
all I want is to put you behind me,
and maybe I will learn to live and love again.
But there is something I want you to know,
I will never forget her,
I will never forget the love we shared,
I will never stop loving her.
You broke my heart,
Maybe… maybe she can heal it.
But will she ever come back?
Will you let her?
Can I make her fall down with this???
Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:38 pm
sexygirl4-you
Joined: 08 Nov 2004
Posts: 14
Location: Illinois
I really like your poem it really tells alot of two people and your feelings well written. No bad for your first poem. You are really good with potery. Basically you are missing the great times that you had and that thier are choices that has to me met. Like you said her or yourself. Well she would have to make the decision who she wants. Love bites ...
Here is a song...
DEF LEPPARD
Love Bites
If you’ve got love in your sights
Watch out, love bites
When you make love, do you look in the mirror?
Who do you think of?
Does he look like me?
Do you tell lies?
And say that it’s forever?
Do you think twice, or just touch ’n’ see?
Ooh babe
Ooh yeah
When you’re alone, do you let go?
Are you wild ’n’ willin’ or is it just for show?
Ooh c’mon
I don’t wanna touch you too much baby
’cos making love to you might drive me crazy
I know you think that love is the way you make it
So I don’t wanna be there when you decide to break it
No!
(love bites, love bleeds)
It’s bringin’ me to my knees
(love lives, love dies)
It’s no surprise
(love begs, love pleads)
It’s what I need
When I’m with you are you somewhere else?
Am I gettin’ thru or do you please yourself?
When you wake up will you walk out?
It can’t be love if you throw it about
Ooh babe
I don’t wanna touch you too much baby
’cos making love to you might drive me crazy
Oh
Ooh yeah
(love bites, love bleeds)
It’s bringin’ me to my knees
(love lives, love dies)
(love bites, love bleeds)
It’s bringin’ me to my knees
(love lives, love dies)
It’s no surprise
(love begs, love pleads)
It’s what I need
If you’ve got love in your sights
Watch out, love bites
Yes it does
It will be hell
Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:51 pm
talula
Joined: 25 Oct 2004
Posts: 48
Location: Upstate New York
babs i just want to let you know that i really like your poem it speaks very strongly! i can also relate to it as well... i have learned that there is always more then one side to a person... theres the one you fall in love with, and the one who shines through after you fall in love... from experience the one that shines through is usually the true person... now this isnt true in all situations, im just telling you what i have learned... hang in there hon, as for showing it to her, i am not sure what to say? just take care of yourself and dont let her hurt you anymore!! love hugs and kisses
talula
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You are really good with potery. Basically you are missing the great times that you had and that thier are choices that has to me met. Like you said her or yourself. Well she would have to make the decision who she wants. Love bites ...
