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Why Can't It Be?

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Lurnz



Joined: 25 Mar 2006
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Why Can't It Be?

Why Can't It Be?
I tried to hold you with my arms,
But Im afraid the people will see,
I Have loved you with my heart,
Though I know its wrong to be.
How many times I've tried to say:
"I love you"
But it seems I cannot do,
For I hide and wondered,
Was is it right to do so?

Why Can't it be?
I know its forbidden,
But why still keep this love unhidden.

I know it Can't be,
For I have no other chance than to leave
And forget thee,

Why can't it be?

Post Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:56 pm 
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ghost



Joined: 06 Nov 2005
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i really like your poems, lurnz...

regards
ghost

ps - have you found the poetry section yet? we prefer original poems to be posted there, and to keep this section in general for discussing published poets' work. you will probably get more responses to your poems there too!thanks.
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