i really love you
you're in me
and i like it this way
bringing light
all around you
pulsing
stirring
calling
awakening all
the best
parts of me...
asking
them to play
come out
and shine
you must have learned
a thing or two
from the stars
you're luminescent
shimmering and love
spectacular
your brilliance exudes
stretches out
i touch it
it sparks electric in me
ecstasy
truth
fire
burns blissfully
as it incurs passion
you captivate me
i can't help
but come
closer...
closer...
closer...
just to feel you
explore you
behold you and surrender
to the fascination...
the wonder
you enthrall and enrapture me
i love you
whew.... _________________ Rapturous paragons of soul authenticity are what I'm after. **Donations accepted**
Mon Feb 06, 2006 2:32 am
GayGoddess
Joined: 27 Jan 2006
Posts: 45
Location: Michigan
Beautiful. And so honest. I can, thankfully, relate to this one right now! Thanks for the gorgeous words, I really enjoyed that! _________________
Mon Feb 06, 2006 9:56 am
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
very nice, soularousal, and welcome to Mels.
i am not sure if you know, but there is a special poetry forum on Melswebs too. Click on the big P in the circle at the top of the screen (just underneath the pictures) and you will find it there.
regards and keep posting!
ghost
Mon Feb 06, 2006 10:28 am
soularousal
Joined: 06 Feb 2006
Posts: 4
Location: Here.
Many, many thanks for reading and enjoying. For the welcome, as well.
Have a most revelatory day.
Peace. _________________ Rapturous paragons of soul authenticity are what I'm after. **Donations accepted**
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