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Mairi bheag



Joined: 04 Mar 2005
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Still in my head, Jackie.

Mb
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Post Sun Sep 25, 2005 4:25 am 
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GreenEyedKiss
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Joined: 22 Jun 2005
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Location: Barony of the Angels in the Kingdom of Caid.


Mb,
Amazing....the love scenes just rake me in.... My "America" is waiting for that dark haired, green eyed beauty *Pulls collar away from neck to reveal a throbbing jugular*
Please continue, Mb
Your friend, Green
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Post Sat Oct 08, 2005 5:51 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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LOL. Thank you, Green - I thought you would like this one!

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Post Sat Oct 08, 2005 6:53 pm 
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cupcakes



Joined: 18 Sep 2005
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Location: NY


you definatly do vampires justice here. I like the world you've described here; The dark and dreary backgrounds make the action and characters brighter.

And there's so much suspense! I was genuinely surprised when I found out what Anne had in mind for Mala... Although I probably should have guessed that everything leads back to mind-blowing sex in this forum.

I get the feeling of loneliness and loss in the narrator, which i find interesting. I'd like to know where this came from. I feel like this could develope into a whole novel.

I'm surprised you chose the mortal's point of view since you said you're part vamp. So next story...Anne the newly sired vampire comes for me rt Wink ? It's about time, I've been waiting ages for my bite.

~cupcakes

Post Fri Oct 21, 2005 10:17 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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I could write from the vampire's point of view,cc, but then most of my readers are mortal. I start with an idea for a story - this one came into my mind whole - and write it from the point of view that seems artistically best to me. The loneliness and loss is part of the story; like everyone else, I have feelings, and I mine them deeply for my stories and poetry. They might not be precisely what I am feeling at that moment, but if I dig deep enough I can find the hurt.

Mind-blowing sex? Yep. Again, it is germane to the story here. I write other stuff where the sexual tension is shown in little more than a fleeting kiss - depends what works.

I am very glad you like it. By the way - the sequel, "Fear Me", is set in ... New York!

Mb
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Post Sat Oct 22, 2005 4:21 am 
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Bravo!!! Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation
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Post Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:34 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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Wilma, thank you for the bouquet Smile

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