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MustangLady32



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My Image Of Love
The most beautiful rose in the garden
could not compare to all the beauty
that she has brought into my life..
The warmest day in summer could not compare
to all the love and warmth that she has shown me..
All the poetry in the world could not
express all that I feel for her...
When rain comes into our life,
she shows me the,
beauty at the end of the rainbow...
Her smile is brighter than any stars
in the nights sky..
Her embrace is so strong, and loving,
that it takes my breath...
Her kiss is so soft and sweet, that I never
want it to end....
When I look in her eyes I know that I was
created to spend the rest of my life with her...
She is the very image of love that all poets
write about...
She is my one and only true love...

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DanceofSorrows



Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837


Mustang,

I think it is a very sweet poem. Have you given it to her yet?


Dance~

Post Sun Oct 31, 2004 5:48 pm 
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MustangLady32



Joined: 30 Oct 2004
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yes I gave it to her this morning!! thank you so much for your feed back

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DanceofSorrows



Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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Aww bet she loved it!!!


Dance~

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Tullia_1976



Joined: 01 Nov 2004
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Wow! The only thing I could think was I wish that was written for me. I also wish I could write a poem like that for my wife, she deserves it. I guess you have inspired me, thank you so much!~Tullia
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Linda Bray



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Very sweet and filled with sincere emotion!
Linda
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scruples



Joined: 28 Jan 2007
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Location: Long Island, NY
On "My Image of Love"

It's cool. You uncomplicate the true beauty of love.
Go a little deeper and wider with your verbal expressions, you will find
there are so many waiting for you to use them. I like the flow of the language, soft and demure, and very meaningful. Idea

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