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Steel Cold Strings Of Recovery
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Avant-garde



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Steel Cold Strings Of Recovery

I sit here in the calm after the fiery storm
Strumming my guitar strings
After thinking about the pound of flesh I gave in my life time,
For the survival of cancer, such an ugly disease
I glide my fingers down the cold steel strings
I strum….
Searching for a melody
That would drown out this small town’s viscous tongue
I let out a deep breath, to release the toxins out of my temple
It knows that God didn’t punish my soul
And I strum….
Can I hum away the agonizing memories?
I do not know but I have to try
I embrace this smooth wooden instrument
That has lifted up my spirit
I strum away as past battles go floating by
And I strum…
These slick strings and chords don’t care of what I am
They submit themselves unto my story, my song
And I strum…..
It doesn’t bother them that I embrace my own gender
My guitar plays they same, with such love and harmony
Each and every note are my unbiased friends
Even when all else fails
Or maybe the clouds rain out my sunshine
I strum….
My guitar does not care about politics, right or wrong,
It just abides with me none the less
And tells me to never give up just to go on
And strum……

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~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.

Post Fri Jul 21, 2006 4:10 am 
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fortheloveofagood...
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nice one baby!

Kx (aka 4 or thelove !)
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Post Tue Aug 08, 2006 2:08 pm 
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Thelove,


Glad you liked and also glad you didn't find any typos. lol. This was the beginning recovery of unterine cancer. So for the longest time I was too weak to hold my arms up to play. Thank goodness that is all over with now.



blessings to TheLove,
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Post Tue Aug 08, 2006 8:55 pm 
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baby,

Hugs you tight...very nice write...I don't look for typo's and such unless asked Wink

smiles at thelove Twisted Evil takes a marker and marks through the (aka 4 or) hehehe

Hugs,
Eiregirl

Post Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:22 pm 
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Eire,
Well mark away on my poems! Hey does thelove have a theme song? I was thinking "The Love Machine" ha ha. Glad you read my poems. Hey I think I have some white out for (aka4)
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Post Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:43 pm 
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Eilidh
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babyrouse,

This one really spoke to me. I was there with you strumming.
Thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Eilidh

Post Sun Aug 13, 2006 2:35 am 
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Baby,

I have enjoyed this, it says alot.


Dance~

Post Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:25 pm 
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Eilidh,

I am very glad you were here to read my poem, I am glad that time in my life is over. It gave me a new perspective on life and made me aware not to miss anything around me.,



blessings,
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Post Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:54 pm 
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Dance,


Yes this poem said alot, I like to hide myself in hidden meanings sometimes, my work is my secret place. I am just glad I have sweet people like you here to share them with.



take care sweetie,
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Post Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:56 pm 
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Hmmm

A theme song for our mascot...

The love machine sounds like it will fit thelove very nicely Smile

Eiregirl (appointed president of the NCC)
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Post Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:18 am 
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Erie,

WIll thelove be doing Choreography too? lol







smilies,
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Post Wed Aug 16, 2006 11:24 am 
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baby,

if you want her to do choreography then so be it Very Happy

Eiregirl Arrow

Post Wed Aug 16, 2006 8:04 pm 
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Eire,


oooooooh goody! lol

smilies from the secretery of NCC,
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Post Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:42 pm 
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Rouse,

This was beautiful.
It spoke to me in so many ways...
Thank you for this, many hugs to you.

Hugs,
Xalia
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Xalia,

I hope all of my poems help others with what ever they are going through. It is my hope and prayer to be able to help others going down the same journey that I have traveled. Thank you for your kindness, I hope you were able to draw some peace from it.

take care X,
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