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HAVE YOU EVER

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apoetsreality



Joined: 12 Apr 2006
Posts: 47
Location: north augusta , south carolina
HAVE YOU EVER

Have you ever

Have you ever dreamed with your eyes open,
I use to every night.
Wishing you were beside me,
so that I could hold you tight.

Do you really believe I didn't hurt,
that I wasn't torn inside?
My heart wasn't mine anymore,
all I could do was cry.

Forcing a smile upon my face,
while the tears built up inside.
Putting on my act I convinced everyone but me,
see I was dieing with no one to share it with baby.

Living a lie while my fairy tale was far away,
dreaming of tomorrow and hoping everyday....
that you hadn't moved on...someone wasn't laying next to you,
wishing I could hold you in my arms its all I wanted to do.

I tried to get over the love that we shared.
Songs that were played, places we went,
I seen your face in everyone...
everything around reminded me of you.

Feeling so torn apart I didnt know what to do,
yes I was with another...
but without you there could be no other.

You've had my heart long before we ever met,
soul-mates from afar we connected so strong.
I could feel you still as if you were close to me,
I was willing to bet you felt it too baby.

I took a leap the first time telling you how I felt,
I had to take the chance again.
To let you know the flame still burned,
the fire you lit within me can never be put out.

Do you really believe I didn't hurt,
that I wasn't torn inside?
My heart wasn't mine anymore,
all I could do was cry.


Now I have you in my arms again,
no more dreaming or wishing every night.
Laying beside you is like heaven on earth,
staring in your eyes , kissing you all the time.

I could never lose you again,
my heart wouldn't be able to bare it.
I was wrong for doing what I did,
but when you walked out the door I felt my heart crushing.

I need you forever in my life,
forever by my side.
Forever and all time,
I can't wait to be your wife.

Have you ever dreamed with your eyes open,
I'm dreaming every night....
of our future together,
as I hold you tight.

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Dont base what you want on appearance dig deeper and connect to a lasting image, for looks may fade but the soul last forever.

Post Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:47 pm 
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lemons



Joined: 12 Feb 2006
Posts: 964
Location: here ... with her <3


As I sit here about half asleep, I kept wondering why ths poem seemed a bit familiar! Then it struck me!! DUH! I'd read it on your site!! (I really must be more tired than I thought! Laughing )

I really like this one ....... This one also describes a lot of what I am feeling right now ..... I appreciate you sharing these all with all the ladies ..... I can really tell these are all written straight from your heart.

Bravo!!! Smile

Mel
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Post Wed Apr 12, 2006 11:24 pm 
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apoetsreality



Joined: 12 Apr 2006
Posts: 47
Location: north augusta , south carolina


Laughing Yes you did read this on my site so I'm sure It sounded vereay familiar lol Glad you enjoyed ......I don't write anything thats not from the heart .....good that you can tell that from my writting.
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