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Why Me?

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kudliebear



Joined: 09 Mar 2006
Posts: 25
Location: North Richland Hills
Why Me?

l ask you why me lord in my depressed mood today....
you answered me in the most loving way....
My child I am here for you when times are so bad..
Lean on me when you feel lonely and sad....

I ask you why me Lord in my happy mood today...
You answered me in the most loving way....
I am glad that you turn to me when things are good...
not just when you are feeling lonely and misunderstood

I ask you why me lord, why do you love me this way...
You answered me in the most loving way....
My child you are precious and a gift you see....
Every individual is loved by me....
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Post Wed Mar 22, 2006 1:44 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Location: Chasing a pink bunny


Kudlie...there is nothing to criticize here Very Happy

I like it just the way it is...the only feedback I can give is that you did an excellent job writing it.

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Post Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:12 am 
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kudliebear



Joined: 09 Mar 2006
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Location: North Richland Hills
Thank You!

Thanks Eirie that was very sweet of you to say!
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Post Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:14 am 
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Cavewoman



Joined: 06 Sep 2005
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what Eire said.

nice reminder.
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