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Evil in the world (#2 sonnet)
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Eiregirl



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quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
* keeps forgetting this is not her thread * Sorry - I am so into sonnets I keep grabbing the ball and running with it! I'll butt out.

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Mairi,

Butt out? NO YOU WILL NOT...YOU JUST GET YOUR BUTT BACK IN HERE

You are more than welcome to post you views and opinions anytime you wish.

Hugs,
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Post Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:31 am 
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Mairi bheag



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Heeeeyyyyy! Eire likes my butt in here! Very Happy

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Post Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:37 am 
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Mairi bheag



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Eire, can I just raise something else here, regarding feedback. AP has a facility for asking for a critical review when one posts a comment. I am going to raise with the Mods/Admin the possibility of marking a posted poem for critical review, maybe by including [F] , for "Feedback please" after the title. Then poets can actually ask when they want to be given opinions about the poetical worth of their work.

You know, by the way, that you are always welcome to give a lit crit of any of mine. The likes of you, pale, sunny, violets, &c are always welcome to pull my stuff apart. "Ordinary readers" I like to hear from too, if they don't quite get what I am trying to say.

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Eiregirl



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quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
Eire, can I just raise something else here, regarding feedback. AP has a facility for asking for a critical review when one posts a comment. I am going to raise with the Mods/Admin the possibility of marking a posted poem for critical review, maybe by including [F] , for "Feedback please" after the title. Then poets can actually ask when they want to be given opinions about the poetical worth of their work.

You know, by the way, that you are always welcome to give a lit crit of any of mine. The likes of you, pale, sunny, violets, &c are always welcome to pull my stuff apart. "Ordinary readers" I like to hear from too, if they don't quite get what I am trying to say.

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To be criticle of any of your poems would be reducing myself to nit picking and sometimes it is hard to find anything to be nit picky about.

I like your idea.

I have let several people know that there is a feedback section for requesting feedback and that if they post in other sections and wish to have criticle feedback then they should state that in the title or above the poem itself.

ummm...looks around....
hmmm you might also mention fixing that darn search thingy so when you search for a persons posts it does not include the 5000 replies they have made. All I want when I search for a persons posts are the actual threads they have started. Should be able to do either...replies and/or threads but if not just give me the threads they started. Smile

Hugs,
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Mairi bheag



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Yeah that would be good - gets my goat too. But I think it would need a whole re-coding to do it, and our fearless Leader is trying to set up house at the moment.

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Embarassed

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sorry, i did leave out a line by mousetake
Embarassed
corrected it
will look at the rest of these comments later Very Happy
thank-you both

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quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
* keeps forgetting this is not her thread * Sorry - I am so into sonnets I keep grabbing the ball and running with it! I'll butt out.

Mb
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I'm quite glad to have both of your opinions....I think you both have something to teach me Very Happy

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Eiregirl



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quote:
Originally posted by pale mirage:
quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
* keeps forgetting this is not her thread * Sorry - I am so into sonnets I keep grabbing the ball and running with it! I'll butt out.

Mb
xx


I'm quite glad to have both of your opinions....I think you both have something to teach me Very Happy


Looks at Mairi...

SEEEE told ye so Razz

Hugs Pale...poem is much better now with the moused line added Smile

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Post Tue Oct 24, 2006 8:39 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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ok already
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quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
ok already


Very Happy are you saying I was right and have rubbed it in enough?

hmmm Question

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I got my own staff for rubbing things in Wink Very Happy

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quote:
Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
I got my own staff for rubbing things in Wink Very Happy

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Very Happy
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LOL Laughing

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