Joined: 04 Mar 2005
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Thanks, Mel. I am posting to commend the excellent reading, not my own poem. Well done.
Mb
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Tue Dec 06, 2005 9:32 am
englishbird
Joined: 02 Oct 2005
Posts: 235
Location: Currently Toronto (formerly Liverpool, UK)
Wow... guys, that was fantastic! Mel... really well read, there was playfulness in your tone that helped the rythm along, but the words... the words and the descriptiveness...
"as rain clothed us in an improptu waterfall..."
"We left the rain blessed garden of our loving, with almost maiden shyness"
"Wrapped in a snowdrift of bathrobe"
i could just go on and quote the whole thing really... so many great descriptive lines, found myself completly wrapped up in the poem, then listened again and heard things I'd missed first time around. Wonderful... just wonderful... thank-you.
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 4:18 am
Mairi bheag
Joined: 04 Mar 2005
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Location: Scotland
Mel, I think we have a hit here!
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 5:38 am
beautifullyjaded
Joined: 04 Sep 2005
Posts: 289
Location: lost in love
I must agree........breathtaking!
hugs,
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Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:24 pm
maitasgirl
Joined: 11 Oct 2005
Posts: 53
Location: Georgia
My girlfriend and I appreciated that very very much! It was beautiful, amazing, and just plain erotic! thank you thank you thank you! _________________ "Be who you are and say what you feel,
because those who mind don't matter
and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss
Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:06 pm
Cunni_L
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 989
fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thu Nov 23, 2006 5:23 am
Mairi bheag
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Thank you CL
Mb
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