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melons
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I am no more

'I am no more'
I am alone,
a myriad of emotions...
flickering...

__ unseen,
____ unheard,
_______ whispering,
__________ 'come listen.'

Old words,
dried
upon dry lips
'I am no more, come listen'
and dry lips
croak
old words.

'I am no more'
my heart beats
within her cracked case...

__ skips,
____ flutters,
_______ spirals,
__________ 'come listen.'

loves beat,
dead
upon deaf ears
'I am no more, come listen'
and deaf ears
deny
loves beat.

'I am no more'
reality cries
its over now...

__ thoughts,
____ memories,
_______ invade,
__________ 'come listen.'


but...

no one listens
__ no one hears
_____ silence bounds this night

come listen!

___________ for I am no more _______________

Post Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:42 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((mel)))

Excellent, a really raw and true spilling and very understood in different depths, if only by emotion alone. I am glad to see you writing more, I really am. We all affect and inspire one another when we just let it go...


Hugs and kisses


Dance~

Post Sat Jul 02, 2005 7:29 pm 
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(((((Dance)))))) xx this was my first go at 'slamming,' and it really helps by letting the emotions go. Yes, we do all inspire each other and we also learn from each other *smiling.* Guess you could tell I was feeling a little blue when I wrote this, huh? lol

Love and kisses,

Mel xox
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Post Sat Jul 02, 2005 10:13 pm 
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Mel,
Well fancy meeting you here...wonderful write hun!! Scooting over so Mel can have a seat.
Huggles,
Linda
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Post Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:32 am 
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LoCe



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Mel, that was just amazing. I loved the flow, and the truth. (((((mel))))) great write!

Post Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:14 pm 
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fabulous...for me..it was like looking in a mirror...
awesome write, babe

tender hugs and kisses
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Post Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:41 pm 
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melons
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...looking right back atcha *smiling*... glad you liked it babes....

luv'n'hugs

Mel xox

Post Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:52 pm 
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((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((MEL))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

As the ladies said above....this is beautifully raw, deep, awesome....

~giving you a HUGE HUG, and a bunch of roses, and you know why...

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LOTS and lots of love, my friend

~real
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Post Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:10 am 
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thanks for excavating this real

((((((((((((((((((((((((((mel))))))))))))))))))))))))))

an awesome slam...

love
Kx
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Post Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:16 am 
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Mel

(((((((((((((((((((( Mel ))))))))))))))))

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Post Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:26 pm 
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Melons,

That was very well done Smile

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Post Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:15 pm 
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melons
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((((((((real)))))))))

Yes, it is raw for me and heaped with emotion, though not many know the reason, only a handful. Expect me to resurrect this poem again on 2nd July, the date has a huge meaning for me, as you know.

Thanks for the hugs and the big bunch of roses.

My love to you and Hawn, always.

Mel xx

Post Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:17 pm 
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(((((((((((4th))))))))))

quote:
Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
thanks for excavating this real

((((((((((((((((((((((((((mel))))))))))))))))))))))))))

an awesome slam...

love
Kx
Thank you 4th, it means a lot to me

love

Mel xx

Post Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:19 pm 
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melons
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My Darling Cat,

quote:
Originally posted by Mdm Prez:
(((((((((((((((((((( Mel ))))))))))))))))

Cat
Thank you for the hug baby.

You are the only one who knows the exact intricacies weaved into this slam, from my perspective and that of the loved one I lost.

I love you Cat,

Your Mel xoxoxox Arrow

Post Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:21 pm 
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Mel

I brought this forward for you, for tomorrow.

(Picture me holding you honey, my cheek softly against yours, my one arm around your waist, the other hand gently rubbing your back. I lean back to look in your eyes and I know what they say. I kiss your eyes and whisper in your ear that I love you more than you could know.)

((((((((((((((((((((((( My Mel ))))))))))))))))))))))))

You are precious to me Sweetheart.

Cat
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