The first half of the CD is non-erotic, the last half is erotic. The cd's layout is on the referring link.
My favorites are Irreconcilable Differences, and Phone Sex.
Please give me any feedback or constructive criticism. All is welcomed! _________________ My mirrors have no reflection, but you inside me, consuming all, every inch, every part of me.....This Ecstacy
Thu Mar 31, 2005 6:45 pm
Tigger Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 890
Hi welcome to melswebs.
Hey you have a lovely voice
Thought the words were a nice soft rap....just one little thing the music was a little to loud on my laptop and over took your lovely voice a bit.
Question for you how do you do set these up?
Tigs
Thu Mar 31, 2005 11:45 pm
tyegreen7
Joined: 29 Jun 2004
Posts: 12
Location: Bloomington, MN
Thank You!
How do I set them up? The songs are set up on my home studio, then I just uploaded them to sound click. _________________ My mirrors have no reflection, but you inside me, consuming all, every inch, every part of me.....This Ecstacy
Fri Apr 01, 2005 1:42 pm
Tigger Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 890
Home studio ...that sounds interesting.
Tigs
Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:14 pm
lionsheart
Joined: 03 May 2005
Posts: 19
Location: Netherlands
its not really my style , but I think its great your doing this , keep up the work _________________ (--Love should be pure--)
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Wed May 04, 2005 1:44 pm
tyegreen7
Joined: 29 Jun 2004
Posts: 12
Location: Bloomington, MN
Thanks Lion....I appreciate all feedback! _________________ My mirrors have no reflection, but you inside me, consuming all, every inch, every part of me.....This Ecstacy
Wed May 11, 2005 1:01 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
Tye,
Honest feedback...you have a nice voice...I didn't like the music though I like the slow rumble of this rap, the beat. The music does drown out your voice. But I will say this lol, um well, 'phone sex' did wake me up
I wish you well in your endeavors, many successes!
Dance~
Thu May 12, 2005 2:44 am
Mac
Joined: 05 Jun 2005
Posts: 224
Location: Australia
wicked sound.
Hey Tye,
ok I'm gona give feed back and feel free to tell me to get ****** if you don't agree...
I love irreconcilable differences. A kick ass beat and a solid mantra happening throughout. The only thing I would personally change is:
I would have a singing chorus earlier in the song. It comes in half way, but i would put it in after the first verse, so either 1/4 or a 1/3 in.
also maybe try out turning treble down a little (I don't know what level its at now, I'm sure it would sound better if I was listening to it with bass turned up).
Also the chord progression you have going throughout gets a little repedative so try mixing it up (it revolves around 4 chords right? like I, II, III, II.) yeah i would have some cadential points between the chorus and verses...maybe like a diminished chord? also maybe take down the chord progressiong down an octave and see how it sounds or just take the levels down ...i dunno if i was focusing on it too hard but thats all i could hear, the four chords...
last thing, did u use like a harpsichord midi sound for some of the backtrack? its interesting coz its different but its distracts from ur voicea little so maybe a different synth instrument?
but overall, wicked track, love ur voice, very hot, kinda sounds like kelis (before she went all trashy and milkshake-esk) and also love songs in minor keys...
ok u probably pissed off at this point, I'd like to appologise in advanced for that.
very solid sound girl,
peace out
Mac.
p.s. did u mix this in pro-tools? _________________ Be generous in prosperity and thankful in adversity.
Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:56 pm
tyegreen7
Joined: 29 Jun 2004
Posts: 12
Location: Bloomington, MN
Yea....it was mixed in Protools, and I'm not mad at any of your comments...You kept it real and I appreciate that! Extremely appreciate it.
That was my first cd, and I know it wasn't up to par as it should of been. The second cd is better in my opinion. _________________ My mirrors have no reflection, but you inside me, consuming all, every inch, every part of me.....This Ecstacy
Mon Sep 12, 2005 5:58 pm
Kessah
Joined: 16 Sep 2005
Posts: 231
Location: Nova Scotia, Canada
hey, loving irreconcilable differences... I would put in another change into the repeat, anything too dancy would take away, something smart and simple. Same as what someone said earlier, those 4 chords are a bit too overpowering... maybe simmer on the echo a bit too, keep it def., but feels a bit much. I'm not a fan of the electronic sound but live I could see this being much more powerful...
great job
kes
p.s. - phone sex... gawd... !!!!!! _________________ From the beginning
I knew meeting could only
End in parting, yet
I ignored the coming dawn
And I gave myself to you
-Fujiwara no Teika
Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:04 pm
labrys
Joined: 14 Feb 2006
Posts: 7
Location: Calgary, AB
georgeous voice and tempo. i like the rythm that you have going, the candace of your voice. soooo sweet.
props womin. props.
Wed Feb 15, 2006 4:46 pm
labrys
Joined: 14 Feb 2006
Posts: 7
Location: Calgary, AB
georgeous voice and tempo. i like the rythm that you have going, the candace of your voice. soooo sweet.
props womin. props.
Wed Feb 15, 2006 4:46 pm
deejay68
Joined: 09 Feb 2006
Posts: 77
Location: In the shadows...
Woah! I loved phone sex. I had to share it with my sweetie!
Keep up the good work.
Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:57 am
tyegreen7
Joined: 29 Jun 2004
Posts: 12
Location: Bloomington, MN
Thanks everyone!
I appreciate all the comments on it.....
Check out more at www.noeticinveigling.com
It's a lot better this time around.
_________________ My mirrors have no reflection, but you inside me, consuming all, every inch, every part of me.....This Ecstacy
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