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To my Therapist [F]

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Tracey



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To my Therapist [F]

I am coming to the end of my therapy and my therapist is moving to australia to work. (Qld is gonna be soooo lucky!)
i want to write her a poem thanking her for all the help she has given me.
does this sound ok?

Thankyou

Thankyou so much from me and my alters
For helping us through the memories
For listening as we tell of the abuse
No matter how horrific it was
You still listened where many others refused
You shared my pain and anxiety
Teaching me the emotions that i had lost
I really can not thankyou enough
i wish you luck in your new job
Australia doesn't know how lucky it is going to be!


Please be honest!

Tracey x
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Post Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:55 pm 
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Tracey

It's perfect!!! Couldn't be any better.

((((((((((((((((((( Tracey )))))))))))))))))))

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Post Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:03 pm 
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Like Mdm Prez said Tracey - this is perfect in terms of its content. And the reason is because it comes from your heart. I think she will be honoured to receive it. Sounds like Qld is getting a good therapist but better tell her to bring a boat!

Can I just suggest you change "tell" in the 3rd line to "told" as the rest of that line is past tense? And perhaps separate "thankyou" into two words. These are minor corrections which will in no way alter the emotional impact of your words.

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Post Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:45 pm 
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Tracey



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(((((((((((((Cat))))))))))))))))

Many thanks!
I just want this to be right for her
she has helped me so much



*hugs*


Tracey x
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I know I'm in my own little world, but it's ok. They know me here.

sometimes i wonder... ' why is that frisbee getting bigger'... and then it hits me

Post Thu Jan 13, 2011 9:03 am 
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Tracey



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(((((((((((((MG))))))))))))))

Many thanks for your advice

i'm really sad to see her leave, though my therapy was still coming to an end
she will be a great asset to Qld especially after what has been happening
i had thought about getting her a pair of waders!


*hugs*

Tracey x
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I know I'm in my own little world, but it's ok. They know me here.

sometimes i wonder... ' why is that frisbee getting bigger'... and then it hits me

Post Thu Jan 13, 2011 9:07 am 
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Tracey



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ammended version

Thank you

Thank you so much from me and my alters
For helping us through the memories
For listening as we told of our abuse
No matter how horrific it was
You still listened where many others refused
You shared my pain and anxiety
Teaching me the emotions that i had lost
I really can not thankyou enough
I wish you luck in your new job
Australia does not know how lucky it is going to be!
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I know I'm in my own little world, but it's ok. They know me here.

sometimes i wonder... ' why is that frisbee getting bigger'... and then it hits me

Post Thu Jan 13, 2011 9:38 am 
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