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Gabriel Fallen



Joined: 29 Jun 2006
Posts: 111
Confirmation

I'm not in love with you
I sigh
As dreams of forever
Slither
Away
I'm not in love with you
You'd said
A brutal affirmation
Localized
I'm not in love with you
I whisper
On the wind
Gone
You're not in love with me
Strength in losing
Moving
Onward
I'm not in love with you
I cry
Distant echo I seek
Shaking
I'm not in love with you
I scream
Just to hear the lie
Brutalized
I'm still in love with you
I think you love me too
We're just terrified.

Post Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:55 am 
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Xalia1
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Gabe,

I love the flow of emotion in this...its fantastic.

Hugs,
Xalia
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Post Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:40 pm 
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MdmPrez



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gabe

This is truly wonderful. You moved me with one. You're a very good poet. More from you, pls.

Cat

Post Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:07 pm 
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Gabriel Fallen



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X ty your opinion ever means the world to me. hella hugs back at you


Mdm ty hon. The way I'm going there shall be more.

Post Thu Nov 05, 2009 4:21 am 
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