Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
The One
Are my eyelashes not wet...
Enough...
.................of this clichéd
Mother - daughter script, I can’t!
Crawl on my knees, it’s
Just not the way I was
Made... to.... I don’t !
Think or feel, too much
Too much, for your
Shallow pool of ‘what if’
What if I don’t?
It’s you that can’t
But I can do more
Than just ‘cope’...
I want to
Twirl in the darkness
Of my own shining
Diamonds
I need to
Rearrange the letters
Of my own alphabet
Listening as I speak
I have to
Keep in contact
With the wise
Woman who
Consistently appears
On the horizon
I am
The
One
Sun May 31, 2009 2:18 pm
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
I love the rhythm and punctuation in this piece ... and the power of the subject matter, too.
~Eilidh
Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:44 pm
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
Ah E, i love it when you love the rhythm... *beats my drum*
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