sol-o my sweet lady...that is a very beautiful beautiful poem. You swept me away with it like a the sweet melody of songs your poem speaks to me about...like the love of my heart when I hear her voice.
Hugs you tight...thank you for this lovely poem
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Thu Jul 10, 2008 5:01 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
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oh. so. sen-sua-l !!!!!
Love it
Kx
Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:59 am
desert-fish
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quote:Originally posted by Eiregirl:
sol-o my sweet lady...that is a very beautiful beautiful poem. You swept me away with it like a the sweet melody of songs your poem speaks to me about...like the love of my heart when I hear her voice.
Hugs you tight...thank you for this lovely poem
Eiregirl
music as the food of love...no doubt
Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:52 am
desert-fish
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quote:Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
oh. so. sen-sua-l !!!!!
Love it
Kx
I am
VERY
sensual...
Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:53 am
Ashelita
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that's pretty descriptive of the feelings of being "caught by a song".
as well as the whole, I particularly enjoyed:
'sound synergy to the soul'
'you felt it in a place where there was no hiding'
'...through your spine...'
'over the veld'
'Caught by a song'
ash _________________ "You'll never be able to dance unless you hear your own music .......... the words on your lips must reflect the truth of your heart. Otherwise your life's breath is muted."
-Carl A Hammerschlag-
Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:25 pm
desert-fish
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quote:Originally posted by Ashelita:
that's pretty descriptive of the feelings of being "caught by a song".
as well as the whole, I particularly enjoyed:
'sound synergy to the soul'
'you felt it in a place where there was no hiding'
'...through your spine...'
'over the veld'
'Caught by a song'
ash
Glad you enjoyed that Ash...perhaps you have seen that sunset over the veld...
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