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Blackness

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Beth



Joined: 01 Jan 2008
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Location: Michigan
Blackness

In the black, the black that consists of nothing,
there is no lack, in the black, there are no more
emotions or thoughts they cannot seep through black's door
In this blackness I see everything, It includes the endlessness

Emptiness for aeons around, light inside of this darkness unfound
For where there is dark, there has to be light to show me the ground
So I shall not be lost in this eternal grave, or stay enchained as its slave
In the blackness of Machpelah, I emerge to see myself outside the cave

Sleep in this deranged tomb no longer, My mind is stronger
My I holds back the light until the blackness is unformed
I break the black so that I may take back what is rightfully mine
Blue light floats through the room of this heart, all is well, fullness is fine

Space filled with nothingness surrounds all outside sounds
I can hear no pain and see no pleasure - Feel no sorrow or need to follow
All is calm, no need to escape, no desire to capture the sullen sparrow
It is free and it doesn't have to come back to me- from blackness I borrow
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Post Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:00 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Beth,

What this brings to mind is something I read a long time ago...I can't remember what I read it in or who wrote it...

"Surrounded by darkness I find peach in its solitude"

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow

Third stanza second line check it out "My I..."

I can see how it could be intentional...but thought I would ask anyway.
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Post Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:24 am 
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Beth



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Hi EireGirl


Wink It was intentional..............




Beth
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Eiregirl



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ohhh and that quote in my previous reply...it is should be peace...not peach LOLOL
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