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NIC
Joined: 15 Aug 2005
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Location: Brooklyn NY
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WARNING: Some may find this disturbing [F]
CONNOISSEUR
This trains movement I can feel
as the blood courses through my veins
I am awakened.
I feel real.
Shadowed beneath myself I was
Until she opened up and let me in
Her vicious taste
Her insidious grin
She quiets down the noise
That lingers inside my head.
The thrust of her presence
Comforts me with my blood instead!
Powerful you are
My fucking blade
My fucking scar
There are times
Too many times
I should have taken control
Raising my hand
When she pushes in
and continues to pull
Taking my breathe.
Stealing my blood
As she pierces my skin.
She is my gift
My sweet little sin
Jagged edges appear
The deeper she thrusts
Releasing my every fear
I’m bound in this cold sweat
With each stroke she takes
My precious Hideaway
My precious Whore.
My heart no longer aches
Cause she’ll always forsake
Leaving my mind open
Bleeding as I wake!
Her deepness bellows
It sometimes hides
My beautiful demon
She made me feel alive
Her purpose to pierce my skin
made me feel whole again
With so much to hide
The blood she takes
The blood of my unhappy wake
I can feel her quiver
She makes me fucking shake
Alive she makes me feel
with every drip
I have nothing left to conceal
I am now open and sore
I won’t give up
I refuse to give in
I embellish on feeling raw!
Powerful you are
My fucking blade
My fucking scar
There are times
Too many times
I should have taken control
Raising my hand
When she pushes in
and continues to pull
Let it go
I will let her go
Her job is done
Opening up
My fucked up little soul
I shall decrease you
as I continue to release you
Now I feel complete
So Thank You
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"For those who understand you,No explanation is necessary, for those who don't,none is possible."
Last edited by NIC on Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:33 pm; edited 1 time in total
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NIC
Joined: 15 Aug 2005
Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY
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Why thanks darlin
I always have many Typo's!
And as far as Stanza's go
I follow no poetry rules
I just write......and no more than 30 seconds to
a minute later I end up with these. _________________
"For those who understand you,No explanation is necessary, for those who don't,none is possible."
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NIC
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Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY
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Oops double post _________________
"For those who understand you,No explanation is necessary, for those who don't,none is possible."
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NIC
Joined: 15 Aug 2005
Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY
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Yeah quite Dark
Glad there wasn't any
responses claiming offense
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Roman
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
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NIC -
That was interesting...
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~ Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me ~
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sensual
Joined: 05 Feb 2007
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Xalia1
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Nic,
Very powerful.
The descriptions in this are unique and accurate.
Thanks for sharing this.
(((((((((Nic))))))))))))))
Hugs,
Xalia _________________ Nobody said life would be easy...They just promised it would be worth it.
~♥♥~
~The words fail me.. because what I feel for you is beyond description...~
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DarkChyldesKiss
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Joined: 29 Mar 2005
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NIC
Thank you for sharing this with us in the darkside. A very powerful write that I hope will help you heal. As others have said there are many who can relate to this poem.
This is type of poetry along with the vamp/goth poetry are why I requested a special forum. Sometimes some of our poetry needs its own place to be released in the dark side.
Thank you for sharing
DarkChylde _________________ (©2001-2011+-...... darkchyldeskiss aka wyldemere )
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Tajzna
Joined: 07 Jan 2008
Posts: 34
Location: Detroit
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I felt every drop of blood hit the floor..pooled and indiscriminate..
Is this what persists of my heart?
to make me bleed?
vengence
keeps ill my veins
my barrow flows deep with deceipt
i'm dirtied and uglied
never to be clean
where do you dangle?
I never see you
though you step heavy on my heart
to make me feel powerless
like a child
reading you made me write this in thirty seconds..i am sending it before i read it again for some reason..although our stories may differ, our pain remains the same..i want you to know that i love you my sister, woman, part of me, part of us all..you are never alone..
Tajzna
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