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desert-fish
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Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
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Location: NY
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Pale,
HMmm how darkfully wicked you have become! I do believe I like it.
grinz, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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desert-fish
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quote:
Originally posted by babyrouse:
Pale,
HMmm how darkfully wicked you have become! I do believe I like it.
grinz,
hahahaha
likes the idea of being wicked with nance....
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Violets-On-The-Sea
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 115
Location: England
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Hi, I do like your style; moving, evocative metaphor and sadly, very true message!
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
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Location: Iowa City, IA
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... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
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quote:
Originally posted by Violets-On-The-Sea:
Hi, I do like your style; moving, evocative metaphor and sadly, very true message!
aaaw thanx violets
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desert-fish
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quote:
Originally posted by BdeCaunteton:
Wow... sol-o, I don't know if you've ever heard of this band but I can hear Within Temptation sing your words! Really a tugger!
Nope I haven't heard of them..."within temptation" you say....hmmmmm
glad you like it
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poeticrendezvous
Joined: 15 Dec 2007
Posts: 278
Location: IL
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I like this, smooth read all the way through with a good cadence.
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desert-fish
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quote:
Originally posted by poeticrendezvous:
I like this, smooth read all the way through with a good cadence.
Thanx poetic....sometimes I get the cadence thingie right....and sometimes I fail....I'm glad I got it this time....ty for your input
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