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Post Wed Apr 04, 2007 6:08 pm 
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pale,

mmmhmmmm love must be nourished

Very nice write

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quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:
pale,

mmmhmmmm love must be nourished

Very nice write

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was written about somebody else's mistake...it came out kinda funny...dont let it worry you Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
thanx for reading

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Post Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:59 pm 
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Pale,

HMmm how darkfully wicked you have become! I do believe I like it.


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Post Sat Apr 07, 2007 2:54 pm 
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they dark side eh? me thinks you're just a temporary visitor Wink
Great poem, as always...

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Post Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:08 pm 
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quote:
Originally posted by babyrouse:
Pale,

HMmm how darkfully wicked you have become! I do believe I like it.


grinz,


hahahaha

likes the idea of being wicked with nance.... Twisted Evil

Post Thu Apr 19, 2007 5:43 pm 
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quote:
Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
they dark side eh? me thinks you're just a temporary visitor Wink
Great poem, as always...

Kx


my muse had pms that's all... Wink

ty Very Happy

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Hi, I do like your style; moving, evocative metaphor and sadly, very true message!

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quote:
Originally posted by Violets-On-The-Sea:
Hi, I do like your style; moving, evocative metaphor and sadly, very true message!


aaaw thanx violets Very Happy

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quote:
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Wow... sol-o, I don't know if you've ever heard of this band but I can hear Within Temptation sing your words! Really a tugger!


Nope I haven't heard of them..."within temptation" you say....hmmmmm


glad you like it Wink

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((((((((((((((sol-o)))))))))))))
Love your temporary visit to the *Dark side* Wink ... an excellent write.... thank you for sharing. Smile


with much love always
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Post Thu Nov 22, 2007 7:59 pm 
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quote:
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((((((((((((((sol-o)))))))))))))
Love your temporary visit to the *Dark side* Wink ... an excellent write.... thank you for sharing. Smile


with much love always
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Hmmmm...I think every-one does have a dark side in at least some sense...but then again as i recall I wrote this...(long ago)...about somebody else I thought was making a big mistake relationship wise


thanx for reading Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Exclamation Arrow Cool

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I like this, smooth read all the way through with a good cadence.

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quote:
Originally posted by poeticrendezvous:
I like this, smooth read all the way through with a good cadence.


Thanx poetic....sometimes I get the cadence thingie right....and sometimes I fail....I'm glad I got it this time....ty for your input Very Happy

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