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To bring home

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fortheloveofagood...
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Location: loves land of plenty
To bring home

Can I be swallowed?
Whole

Can I be eclipsed?
Instantaneously

Will I follow?

But…

Your bead
…Of sweat
………Is not mine
Yet…

I have judged

‘You’re a critical fool
A suffragette of your own making
A bully who’s been bullied
Pushing down your reign
Of one woman terror
In your terrified state
Of…’

I have been you and in you

Feeling each fear infused thought

As I swaddle you in my arms
Searching for an anchor
Lost to her loss

My soul, scanning

For answers to bring home

I can’t stop

I just want to…
I just want to…

Do something
Be something
Become
Something
For you
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'

~peace comes from knowing only love is real~

Post Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:09 am 
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Eilidh
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Posts: 1880


Wonderful slam, K.
You know how to pull your reader into your world. Well done.

~Eilidh

Post Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:38 am 
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