Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
To bring home
Can I be swallowed?
Whole
Can I be eclipsed?
Instantaneously
Will I follow?
But…
Your bead
…Of sweat
………Is not mine
Yet…
I have judged
‘You’re a critical fool
A suffragette of your own making
A bully who’s been bullied
Pushing down your reign
Of one woman terror
In your terrified state
Of…’
I have been you and in you
Feeling each fear infused thought
As I swaddle you in my arms
Searching for an anchor
Lost to her loss
My soul, scanning
For answers to bring home
I can’t stop
I just want to…
I just want to…
Do something
Be something
Become
Something
For you
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~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:09 am
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
Wonderful slam, K.
You know how to pull your reader into your world. Well done.
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