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I Love Girls

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Crindaguitar



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I Love Girls

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=90145

It's the first song. If you have to join to listen, it's a free site. No strings. It's a site for indie artists to post their music.

This is a rough version. It's a guide vocal, and acoustic guitar and drums. Harmonies, bass and lead guitar will be added at some point. Hope you like it.


When I was five, I loved a girl
Genie was her name
She was my very best friend
I know she felt the same
I’d always plant one on her cheek
At the end of the day
That was, until my mother cried
“You shouldn’t behave that way”

“She's not a cousin - not a sister
She’s a girl - You shouldn’t kiss her”

But I love Girls
How can this be wrong?
There is no sweeter melody
Calling to me like a Siren’s song
Whenever I am with them
I know I belong
Precious pretty pearls - Girls

Kathy caught my eye in Junior High
She thought The Beatles were boss
We cut gym to work on
Our Marlboro cigarette coughs
Long golden hair, dark chocolate eyes
That could make me melt
What would be the harm
If I told her how I felt?

But I said too much, my words betrayed me
Is this the way my heart repays me?

I love Girls
But I guess she’s not for me
She’d rather sing a different song
One with boys doing harmony
I felt so bad inside
That’s not how it should be
Confusion in me swirls - Girls

Uncertainty had a hold on me
Do I dare care again?
And then I found Gwen
She said she knew she loved me too
And when our lips met
It was Kismet…
She’s still my favorite girl

Now I have women friends
They’re sexy, fun and wise
And I can still see the girls
Shyly smiling behind their eyes
We hug hello, we kiss goodbye
It’s simple as can be
I’m not afraid to say and show
All that they mean to me

Just as it’s been from the start
It’s the female that wins my heart

I love Girls
It’s a feeling oh so strong
There is no sweeter melody
Calling to me like a Siren’s song
Whenever I am with them
I know I belong
Wavy, straight or curls
Precious pretty pearls
They set my heart awhirl
Girls

Copyright May 8, 2004 Corinne Curcio

Post Sun May 27, 2007 10:55 pm 
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this is an excellent audio, you have a lovely voice, Like the Lyrics too.i have thoroughly enjoyed listening,Thank you for sharing.


with all my love and my deepest respect
Angel1 xxxx Arrow

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Post Mon May 28, 2007 12:50 pm 
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crindaguitar,

That is wonderful...thank you very much for sharing this wonderful piece.

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Post Mon May 28, 2007 9:07 pm 
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Crindaguitar



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Thank you for listening, Angel1 and Eiregirl. I'm glad you like it Smile

Post Mon May 28, 2007 10:32 pm 
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brilliant! Wink
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Post Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:29 pm 
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This was fantastic!
I loved the lyrics and the voice...rock on chickie.

Hugs,
Xalia
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Post Tue Sep 11, 2007 12:46 pm 
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This is so great. I hope this takes you some where. because you definately have some talent!!!!



*hugs*

*smiles*

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I clicked on the link and there was a different first song 'In the Hurting Time' then I realized this was an old post hehe. I really liked that song though from what I heard. Great job.


Dance~

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