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I sat in silence listening, seeing the scene you painted with stunning words Mel, and when it finished, i sat in silence, then took a deep breath. You do realize you could sell these on cd and make a mint don't you?
Fabulous in all ways Mel, well done.
phoenix (brat)
Namaste in heartfelt friendship. _________________ "A little work won't hurt you bad, but just in case I'm wrong, you'll be smiling when they pronounce you dead." Amanda Marshall 'This could take all night
Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:20 am
cjerbear
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
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melons....
Superb.................... :}} CJ _________________ The thing that is really hard, and really amazing, is giving up on being perfect and beginning the work of becoming yourself. (Anna Quindlen)
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Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:18 am
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Mama Mel,
Incredible! I agree with Phoenix about you making poetry cd's....your voice gives the poem so much depth and description...I tried not to "look" as each word brought images to my head....but couldnt help it...LMAO. I can imagine listening to this on cd in the car....News at 11....woman causes 14 car pile-up on freeway while listening to poetry on cd...."But really, officer, if you'll just listen to it, youll see that I'm completely not at fault"...lol
Wonderfully done, my friend.
Green _________________ "I don't know what I'm doing, but I'm getting it done." ~ADM
"What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others remains immortal"
Sun Jun 15, 2008 10:06 pm
rain11
Joined: 03 Dec 2007
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Haha Green! I could see that too!
I was also left speechless after this!
Very well done!
Rain
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