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BdeCaunteton



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Post Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:28 am 
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Eiregirl



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Bde,

Very good Very Happy

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Post Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:16 am 
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DarkChyldesKiss
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Bde,

Shiny! I think you've got a knack for the darkside. You've drawn me in to see your words play out! Most excellent

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Post Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:27 pm 
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desert-fish



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I like this...and your rich use of words...just wondering:
"In so doing, this old vampyre smiles with steak in hand to lie in the casket which waits to lock.:

did you mean steak or stake?

smiles
sol-o Very Happy

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BdeCaunteton



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Post Mon Sep 10, 2007 1:19 am 
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desert-fish



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quote:
Originally posted by BdeCaunteton:
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Originally posted by sol-o:
I like this...and your rich use of words...just wondering:
"In so doing, this old vampyre smiles with steak in hand to lie in the casket which waits to lock.:

did you mean steak or stake?

smiles
sol-o Very Happy


oh oops i didnt notice that, thanks Solo!


well you gotto admit that it's kind of a funny image...retiring to your casket witha steak...was it a lady's rump steak BDE? Shocked Wink

Post Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:50 am 
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Ophelia



Joined: 24 May 2007
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Bde C -

You've create a wonderfully atmospheric piece here, I was completely
seduced into to the thrilling world you poemed.
Your vocabulary: acrid lust, evil dawn on my cheek, disgraceful clock are
awesome and call up eerie images I won't soon forget.


O.

Post Sat Sep 15, 2007 5:18 pm 
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PipSqueak



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Bumping!
Bde's gotten published!!!

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