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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 955
Location: Iowa City, IA
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... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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DarkChyldesKiss
Site Admin
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Posts: 3381
Location: Inner Sanctum
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Bde,
Shiny! I think you've got a knack for the darkside. You've drawn me in to see your words play out! Most excellent
DarkChylde _________________ (©2001-2011+-...... darkchyldeskiss aka wyldemere )
(All works are copyrighted and protected.
DO NOT copy my writing without Permission!)
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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I like this...and your rich use of words...just wondering:
"In so doing, this old vampyre smiles with steak in hand to lie in the casket which waits to lock.:
did you mean steak or stake?
smiles
sol-o
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 955
Location: Iowa City, IA
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... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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Ophelia
Joined: 24 May 2007
Posts: 464
Location: The Tower
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Bde
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You've create a wonderfully atmospheric piece here, I was completely
seduced into to the thrilling world you poemed.
Your vocabulary: acrid lust, evil dawn on my cheek, disgraceful clock are
awesome and call up eerie images I won't soon forget.
O.
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PipSqueak
Joined: 04 Jul 2008
Posts: 987
Location: S.W. England
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Bumping!
Bde's gotten published!!!
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