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Lingering Lingerie Like Lilacs Lolling

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EverydayAngelKarie



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Lingering Lingerie Like Lilacs Lolling

Lingering Lingerie Like Lilacs Lolling

This poetry is not coming to me naturally
I am forcing it out
But don’t feel like a sprout with no doubt
In what my mind and thought can clout
Like A sad smile in the middle of a pout
And I scream
Fish me a heart of trout
Or some other kind of orbital stout
Acute mean of transportation
With fins
Aerodynamic as bird’s wings
Nails like radar
And I can feel the sting
Of your air when you breathe on me
White and black
Like a pancake stack
With a syrup lack
What do you think about that
Can a cat in a hat
Really chase and catch a rat
Or is it all just a misunderstanding
When it comes to rounding and rounding
Corners
Sharp like knives
Flesh like butter
Organs like bread
I hear you are the same things that they once said
And I was everything I never thought you misread
A lingering tongue on the lobe of my ear
Makes me smear the makeup wondering
If lipstick was really meant to go here and there
Is it really as fair as it could have been
Considering the circumstances we were given?
Is it true God sent Jesus Christ his son to die for human sin and be risen
Or did the sunset just sleep,
And then rise after three days
Creating this concept that all sin had been forgiven?


(wrote this a few minutes ago, this is another stream of consciousness type poem, forced myself to write for 3 minutes non-stop, no editing, that's that. just trying to get all the shit out so i can do my hmwk assignment)

Post Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:01 am 
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lol!!!!

interesting experiment

and you just gotta love the title!

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