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Chaos
Joined: 27 Nov 2006
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*Insomnia-A dark nursery rhyme*
*Insomnia-A dark nursery rhyme*
twinkle twinkle
little pain
I see you’ve come
to play again
lodged here in my soul so tight
turning brightness into night
twinkle twinkle
tearing ache
please let me sleep
to never wake….
…now I lay me down to sleep
my life in tatters at my feet..
if I should Wake before I die
I pray these tattered wings can fly..
twinkle twinkle
empathic strain
I never want to feel again
trapped here in this world so cold
where self is wrong
and Us is gold.
twinkle twinkle
falling tear..
how i wonder why i'm here..
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lemons
Joined: 12 Feb 2006
Posts: 964
Location: here ... with her <3
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Chaos,
Wow ..... I like this a lot .... prolly because it is how my life feels right now! lol
Lemons
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Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:50 am |
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
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Location: loves land of plenty
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this is very powerful, because of the way you have written it, almost sinister.
why are you here? why not... your purpose, your meaning, is your mystery, keep discovering and loving.
again, great write,
Kx
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Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:20 am |
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sensual
Joined: 05 Feb 2007
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Wed Feb 21, 2007 1:46 pm |
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
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Location: loves land of plenty
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*almost sinister* - doh it's in the dark poetry section. i didn't realise!
and smiles back @ X~~
Kx
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
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sprinkles the pirate
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 121
Location: columbus, Georgia
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Cool as poem 
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I am the dark that give life to the light of you.
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Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:57 am |
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EverydayAngelKarie
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Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
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is it wrong that i find this cute-ish and not dark and depressing? (lol.)
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