Joined: 17 Apr 2008
Posts: 10
Location: California
Spiritual
THE SOUND OF PEACE
The sound of peace
Like a waterfall
Whispers in your ear
Like a sea breeze
Lay your head upon my shoulder
And rest
Your time will come when you can sleep
You will hear the sound of peace
Like a waterfall while you sleep
Whispers in your ear
Like a sea breeze
And when you close your eyes
You will see the light
The light will guide you
To the sound of peace
Like a waterfall
Whispers in your ear
Like a sea breeze
Lay your head upon my shoulder
And rest
Your time will come when you can sleep
And feel eternity
Oh so sweet
Hugs,
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:17 am
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
goodwin,
This poem has an entrancing quality to it.
Nicely done.
~Eilidh
Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:11 pm
ggoodwin956
Joined: 17 Apr 2008
Posts: 10
Location: California
Thank you, my partner, my soulmate passed away 4 yrs ago and I started writing poetry about 3yrs ago. It is the only way I have found to express my grief.
Geri
Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:45 pm
Angel1 Moderators
Joined: 09 Mar 2007
Posts: 1518
Location: U.K
hi(((((((ggoodwin)))))))
this is such a beautifully penned write with wonderful word play.Thank you so much for sharing.
I am so sad to hear of your beloved partners passing(((((hugs)))))) you will be in my thoughts and my prayers.
with lots of love
Angel1x
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