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fortheloveofagood...
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Lightly, Fully, Ready

The light touch
Of magenta swirls
Voicing your…
Pentagon shaped
Terms…

Does she follow?
Or does Her Janus head
Simply swivel

And as much
As she knows
She doesn’t

All prayers
Even those
Barely whispered
Are heard… (?)

So she purposively
M o u t h s
What she
Desires:

Place them … slender… hands … lightly… place them …
Bring them … cryptic… clues … fully… bring them …

You know her

And she’s more
Than!

She's positively

Ready

Last edited by fortheloveofagood... on Fri May 30, 2008 8:17 am; edited 1 time in total

Wed May 28, 2008 1:55 pm

EverydayAngelKarie

Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA

i really like this poem 4, Smile

nice stuff. i like your word choice. nice combos of words as well. indeed. good good good.

Thu May 29, 2008 8:25 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

thelove,

Very nicely done...as always your poetry is a joy to read.

Hugs,
Eiregirl

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Fri May 30, 2008 3:42 am

fortheloveofagood...
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Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty

((((((Eda)))))))) hey gir, thanks a lot... i did deliberate over the word choice, somewhat more than usual...

Hey ((((eire))))) thanks... i kinda like reading my stuff too! lol

Kx

Fri May 30, 2008 8:18 am

Angel1
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(((((((((((((((((Forthelove)))))))))))))
This is such a beautifully penned write and was /is such a pleasure to read.Thank you for sharing.I'm looking forward to savouring even more of your wonderful poetry Exclamation

(((((((((hugs))))))))))
Angel1 x x x Exclamation

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Sun Jun 29, 2008 11:18 pm

fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty

((((((((((((Angel))))))))))))))))) (ya can call me K, you know! lol)

Thanks for stopping by, and i'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Love
Kx

Mon Jun 30, 2008 4:00 pm

desert-fish

Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted

I have missed your poems...they are unique...you say much with few words..

more please?
(no pressure ok)

Very Happy

sol

Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:33 am

fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty

ahhh, thank you sol-o (or desert fish! lol) that's encouraging, i am sure my pen will be more fruitful soon, i sometimes go through some dry patches (yeah, yeah! im not that old, yet!)

Kx

Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:57 am

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