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BdeCaunteton

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Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:38 am

Eiregirl

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Bde,

What can I say...this is beautiful and it was a joy to read.

When you ask me to look at form in verses I tend to look for specific verse forms like a Sonnet or Villanelle or a specific rhyme pattern, metre, alliteration or things of that nature.

It is beautifully done sweetie and brings to mind the words of some wonderful poets.

Hugs,
Eiregirl

I will visit this one again with perhaps further comments Smile

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Wed Jun 25, 2008 4:28 am

BdeCaunteton

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Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:26 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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LOLOL

I noticed that and I kept trying to think what form this could be...it has little minute aspects of different forms but then again almost every poem does Smile

I really did enjoy reading it and it is beautifully done sweetie

Hugs,
Eiregirl

Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:32 am

Eilidh
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Joined: 09 Apr 2005
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B,

I'm not as good as Eire in dissecting rhythm Wink

, but I will say that the images remind me of dancing around the fire during Samhainn. Those were good times and this is a great poem!

~Eilidh

Fri Jun 27, 2008 10:20 am

BdeCaunteton

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