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sillywolf

Joined: 09 Jul 2007
Posts: 311
Location: The last frontier

Goodbye.

~~For my old dear friend Cindi.... I'm so sorry I wasn't there for you...
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Stuck in a world of oppression
Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
Listening to people laugh and point
She gets fed up and reaches a breaking point

She goes on a downward spiral after that
Finding all sorts of things to keep her mind off life
Nothing works
And she’s hit the end
All the visible hiding spots are gone
And no hidden ones ever existed

She lays out her tools
A row of pills
And a glass of water
No one will know
Theres nothing left
Whats to lose?
Just her last breath

She takes a breath
And picks up the first pill
Takes another breath and gulps it down
She repeats the process
Again and again
Until all the pills are gone

She remembers one last thing and writes a note
To all her old friends and her parents
Saying she would have been sorry
If someone had been there for her
But she was left alone in the cruel world
And forced to take it in the face
She had enough
And as we all know enough is enough
So this is the easiest way to rid the pain
Goodbye.

With those last words
She lays the note by the glass and bottle of pills
And lays down on her bed
One last time.

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Crying so hard as I write this...
I love you.. and still do even though you are no longer here for me to tell you so.

Silly Exclamation

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Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:45 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

Hugs you very tight Sad

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Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:58 am

Xalia1
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Joined: 05 May 2004
Posts: 3702
Location: In love

Oh Wolf...
This was heart wrenching...
Sending you many hugs.
Thank you for sharing this.

Xalia
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Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:34 am

Beth

Joined: 01 Jan 2008
Posts: 336
Location: Michigan

Sillywolf

She knows

This is a lesson to us all to try and listen more closely to all our sisters

Sending you healing prayers to hope you will always walk in beauty...

"Hear me, my chiefs! I am tired; my heart is sick and sad, From
where the sun stands I will fight no more forever" Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

Crying or Very sad

Be strong Wolf

Beth
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Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:00 pm

Violets-On-The-Sea

Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 115
Location: England

I am deeply moved by this polished, expressive write; sending you lots of hugs!!!!!

Sat Apr 05, 2008 8:54 pm

EverydayAngelKarie

Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA

hey moo, i really felt a strong emotional conncetion to this. i shed a tear even. i'm sorry you lost a friend like that. really sorry.((((((((((

)))))))))

Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:18 am

Moswen

Joined: 11 Apr 2008
Posts: 2

Wow, That's a hard thing to deal with, sorry for your loss.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:19 pm

uniqueandalanis4

Joined: 23 Dec 2007
Posts: 62

aww silly im so sorry! Sad

i know how you feel''its so hard to lose a loved one especially through depression''drug's!i lost my first love from it..and she was twenty and still had a paulse but no one cared to save her!
this is really emotional for you and for me!they say time heal's all pain..but it doesnt at all..the memory's sometimes make you fall..

thanks for sharing! Exclamation

always unique..
hug's to you.. Crying or Very sad

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