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SharayaKai

Joined: 13 Feb 2007
Posts: 245
Location: Mountains of Utah

Darkness

Darkness falls heavily over my tortured soul.
The weight of years past crushing the hope of days present.
Viselike tendrils seep into my walls gripping an unguarded heart;
ripping it from a shaky foundation.

Darkness invades, filling the hole once held by my heart.
Oozing into every cavern, every crevice,
pushing out the remaining sparks of light. Sorrow now rules;
sending a broken spirit down the tumultuous mountain of Inability.

Darkness sings its own mournful song.
Eerie moans of lost souls join mine in the chorus that is Failure.
Reaching with sickly fingers they pull me further into the abyss.
Sirens sing, teeth gnash, sobs form tearless.

There is no Hope. There is no Light. There is Nothing.
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Sun May 27, 2007 5:22 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

SharayaKai,

I think this is a wonderfully written poem

I enjoyed reading it

Hugs,
Eiregirl

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Sun May 27, 2007 8:38 am

SharayaKai

Joined: 13 Feb 2007
Posts: 245
Location: Mountains of Utah

Thank you Eire.

'Twas a terribly dark time in my life, thankfully 'tis passed as well.
I truly appreciate you taking the time to reply to my offerings. I admire your own works and think highly of you for them.

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Sun May 27, 2007 2:22 pm

SummerJoy

Joined: 11 Jul 2005
Posts: 198
Location: England

SharayaKai,

You evoke memories of a bleak situation so graphically. So relieved and happy to read it's all in the past.

SummerJoy

Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:36 pm

SharayaKai

Joined: 13 Feb 2007
Posts: 245
Location: Mountains of Utah

Thank you Summer, I'm glad as well. (Sorry my reply is so late.)
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Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:22 am

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