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BdeCaunteton

Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 955
Location: Iowa City, IA

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Tue Dec 11, 2007 7:44 am

lori

Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454

love it!

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WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..

Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:52 pm

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

I second lori...love it Smile

Hugs,
Eiregirl

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Wed Dec 12, 2007 12:16 am

Beth

Joined: 01 Jan 2008
Posts: 336
Location: Michigan

Spooky!

No mouth - can't express the great heaviness inside
Idle among the lilies and daisies - not at work reaping the flowers gifts of joy

She calls to the Phantasms - Cause they know her pain they revel in it
Melancholy casts darkness on the Day where the flowers play
In exchange for human misery with our happiness we pay

Very nice combination of dark and light metaphors and simile

Great story of Depression and its affect on our lives

I'll remember to water the Lilies

Beth
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Tue Jan 08, 2008 6:45 am

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