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Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:07 am
poeticrendezvous
Joined: 15 Dec 2007
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Location: IL
We all interpret something differently in poems. But I will share with you my thoughts.
There are a number of lines that indicate a resentment towards external forces, or the world you are writing about.
"Concerns of the instant give way to reflection
Here we are again at the crossroads
"Look into their minds
Those on the edge of vision
And find the mental habits of submission
Suffocating free thought"
That statement speaks to me of a challenge to examine external norms, values, rules, rituals and habits against internal ones.
"Identity crisis is almost an obsession
In the mysterious city that turns humans
Into machines
From embryo to ashes"
This is an interesting statement. Could mean many things but insightful in following the last statement in that once again externalizing personal value and worth brings crises. It's funny, in liberal societies...evaluating identity, norms, values, rewards etc takes a lot longer in time than in conservative ones which seems to limit personal 'conflict' as many idea's, beliefs and the cultures ways are unconscionably accepted. Kids who grow up in those extreme fundamental countries automatically have their values and norms and ways of life set in many cases unless they are given something else to work with.
"The spiral of development is pointed downward
When we are fenced in
For our own safety
To a society
We did not invent"
Cognitive or external statement?
I love these lines following... it is poetically light and dark at the same time.
"Notes of hope as if frozen in time
Fall like snowflakes
Individual and unique
To the ground of sameness"
This is also another of my favorite lines...
"Like a dying forest wrapped in fiery embrace
It calls for help with windblown smoke signals
Distorted in the air before translation
These lost languages"
That is a very powerful statement and wonderfully written, there is so much I can take from that!
and here is the crux of all your descriptions and going back to internalize...
"Introspective inside behaviorist expectations
The isolation seems to give an extra edge to
Every human hurt
The sensory organ of empathy is overloaded
And the ship wrecks into melancholic ignorance"
Like I said, we all take something different from the poem and many times it is no where near what the writer had in mind. But the gift of poetry is like that, it shares and allows something to be given to the reader in the freedom of interpretations.
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