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Ancient Americans Caught In Canyon Rock

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MichaelFirewalker



Joined: 22 Aug 2006
Posts: 97
Location: Seattle
Ancient Americans Caught In Canyon Rock

* [please read aloud]




together we stand
wild me gentle you
lovers who
hand in hand
wear Mother’s free land

we’re looking over at those
ancient American souls
rock swimming in moonlight

a mesmerizing sight
this bodiless two
now merely impressions
left to behold

their elegant postures
smoothly fluidic
flow into artistic
painters’ maneuvers
of hard liquid love-light

blending to one
then swimming on through
solid rock pastures
of spiraling song
they swirl along
to become

ribbons of scarlet-drawn dawns
twirling down into tomorrow
expanding their silver-white souls
threading them redding them upward
then bursting them out shouting blue

until I can see fateful you
newborn then reborn anew

it was here that you swam
moving along
into now

Native American woman
hear what is right
know what is true

nothing as righteous as you
will ever be gone

simply because
you will always return
in our intimate cycles
of endless rebirth

you are life
you are light
you are love

you are…

Earth


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Post Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:06 pm 
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Eiregirl



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Firewalker,

That last little piece toward the end...

Mother earth is were it all starts and where it all ends


Will get back to you on this one.

Eiregirl Arrow
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MichaelFirewalker



Joined: 22 Aug 2006
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Location: Seattle


Hi, Eiregirl----ok, but I don't understand what you are saying here...

Blessings be,
Michael

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Eiregirl



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Firewalker,

The cycle of life...

Earth to earth ashes to ashes

Eiregirl
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MichaelFirewalker



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ahhhh.....ok, dat's cool...

Thanks,
Michael

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Eiregirl



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Everytime I read this one something new comes to mind

The first time I read it the last part gave me the impression I stated earlier...
Mother Earth is where it all starts and where it all ends

The next time I read it I got the impression of ancient rock painting or drawings as though I were looking at them in moonlight and at the break of day.

When I read it again I could see clouds floating in the sky as though they were the souls of dawn reaching to the sky.

I think I may have to read it a few more times.

Eiregirl Arrow
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Cavewoman



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i LIKE this............
thanks...

(takes a bit of doing though... to fluidly read aloud)
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Post Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:37 am 
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MichaelFirewalker



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Eiregirl----thanks for playing with it----it's a sneaky one...

Cavewoman----you are right, it's a tricky talker too...

Michael

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