Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 74
Location: Gt.Manchester UK
My Poem
Don't know if its any good
Just before I open my eyes
And my mind begins to wake
Leaving dreams behind on my pillow
I remember that you are next to me
The morning sun luminating your hair through my eyelids
And for a moment I want to stay here forever with my eyes closed tight
With you in my arms
Then I think I want to open them and see you!
But don’t want to break the warm sleeping bubble
And awaken you
Don't want the days demands creeping in on our slumber
Crawling under the covers
Do I keep them closed, or do I peep open?
I can smell you and no longer can resist I need to see your face
And there you are, peaceful and breathing deep
Every morning when I awake with you, you take my breath away with your softness
And the feeling that I just want to sink into you enlopes me
As the hour tugs at my feet I uncurl us from each other
You stir and frown pulling me back close and as I kiss you goodbye
And your arms curl back into your body
I don't think you quite know that you take my heart back into slumber with you
Held safely against your breast
Kept warm with your sighs
I wish you a good day my dear
Secretly knowing
All day to you I'll be near
Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:27 pm
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
nice one, Flo, but please note that this part of the boards is for discussing your favourite poet-in-print. your OWN poems can be posted for comments and feedback (if wanted) on the Poetry boards (click on the big P in the circle at the very top of the page0.
welcome aboard!
regards
ghost _________________
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Thu Mar 22, 2007 3:54 pm
flosspot24
Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 74
Location: Gt.Manchester UK
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