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kamikazeControl



Joined: 21 Aug 2006
Posts: 2
Location: nyc
midnight lady

Cool The way I miss a women ….

Midnight lady:

- midnight lady hangs late, she says awake until the dawns break,
- midnight lady has the smoothest of skins and she wears air for clothing
- Midnight lady knows how to undress the room with slight glances, creating slaves in her wake- sweat thirsty for her taste…

The first woman to take midnight lady into the dark feels like the world is now spun on her finger. She allows midnight lady to engulf her in a warm breath massage. Kisses up the nape of her neck into the corners of her eyes… midnight lady removes all of first woman’s fears. She allows for the future to be unknown but the present be a powerful pleasure.

Most women can not control the sensual feeling that overcomes the mind when the body is fully engaged in acts of fantasy. Midnight lady controls this feeling…. If not running her fingers across the curves of our bodies then she’s blowing kisses into the air we breathe …. This is the introduction to Midnight Lady….. And the midnight express….


… the bar is dark and rather gloomy – its Wednesday, hump day and the stage is set – full of older rebellious whities , all sipping some American made beer… looking at each other as if variety was a word never invented. Dark dingy hung clothing, vintage exempt- just old… midnight lady scrolls over to the rear of the bar – she has set her skills in motion … for on her way to the bar she catches the stares of many a dagger…. She taunts with the idea of playing with an old secret --- licking her lips she looks backwards into a mirror, she sees ….

Midnight drops her dark jacket unto the counter and mouths to the bartender … watch this…. She struts wildly into the middle of an empty dance floor… gracefully she swings to the left and to the right a tiny dip in which she receives her required stare… it comes from a lit corner of this dark place
– first woman…. wearing--- police glasses, she bends them to allow for their eyes to meet. And with that one intense stare the ladies began to unravel the buttons to there jeans in a rush to the darkest corner of the room ……


Well ladies – this is my first attempt at midnight lady … feedback is a must…

muah

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Post Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:43 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny


KamikazeControl,

Welcome to Mels Smile
It is a pleasure to have you here.

As to your story...very nicely done so far...just a couple of misspelled words and maybe a few other minor little nit picky details but nice.

If you would like more feedback on your wonderful story...why not try posting it here...

http://www.melswebs.com/storyboards/index.php

That is the story board section of Melswebs...that is where stories are posted. There are many different categories to choose from so you can place the story in an area where people of similar interests will have a better chance of finding it and reading it. If the link above does not work...try clicking the “S” with a big circle around it.

This particular section...the story writing section of the general board (the one we are currently in) is for talking about our favorite writers...as the heading says underneath “Story Writing” it says “Tell us about your favourite lesbian writers...”

Thank you very much,

Eiregirl Arrow

Post Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:20 pm 
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