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Fernanda.F.Rocha



Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 1392
Location: Portugal
Just sharing.....

Disillusion

Her face, like stone
Draw a bitter rite in her rigid lips
Her clear eyes, lifeless
Stare the emptiness
Her bent body
Leans on her uncertain walk.

In the silence of the night
The whisper of the wind
Hurts her aching soul
Fading her in a tired tumult.

She follows her footsteps
Wherever they lead her
Like a doomed
In an unconscious grief.

Invades her brain
Flashing memories
Of days of dream, once lived
A longing pain craves her chest
And a tear rolls down her face.

A sunbeam erupts shy
behind the dense fog
hitting her face
Brightening her eyes
A new day being born.

By Fernanda F. Rocha©
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Post Thu Aug 17, 2006 12:25 pm 
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ghost



Joined: 06 Nov 2005
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Location: MIA


hi moon

i loved this, especially the positive ending!

please share more of your poetry with us, we have a whole forum just for that. click on the P in the circle at the top of the page, if you havent found it yet.

i am sure you will love it.

ps nice website you have!

regards
ghost
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Fernanda.F.Rocha



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Thank You Very Happy
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